Kchoo Experience

[Toroid]

Congratulations.

 

[Rick Hunter]

Looking forward to it!

 

[Kchoo]

Howdy Readers.

I got some feedback from readers who purchased my book.

They like Kchoo Experience, but a few said they would like more details... Betyer descriptions of the environments and what the different chracters look like...

So I am looking for your advice...

1. Should I add more descriptions of the characters and more details about their surroundings?

2. What would you like to know more about?

 

[Toroid]

You could add a list of beings you've interacted with, a description and possibly a section with renderings. Here's a few examples from Jim Sparks' book 'The Keepers'.

The short Grays teaching him an alphabet.

Jim meeting with a group of Reptilians at an abandoned amusement park. They were using screen images of human faces. A fear of Reptilians was engineered into our DNA.

Seeing one of their craft.

 

[humanoidlord]

You could add a list of beings you've interacted with, a description and possibly a section with renderings. Here's a few examples from Jim Sparks' book 'The Keepers'.

The short Grays teaching him an alphabet.

Jim meeting with a group of Reptilians at an abandoned amusement park. They were using screen images of human faces. A fear of Reptilians was engineered into our DNA.

Seeing one of their craft.

jim was likely lying

 

[Kchoo]

jim was likely lying

Thanks, but we established that already.

The current questions pertain to Kchoo Experience and reader comments about improvement of its content.

 

[Rick Hunter]

Hmm, I'll have to think about that!

 

[nivek]

The current questions pertain to Kchoo Experience and reader comments about improvement of its content.

Are you writing to sell books and make money or to share your experiences first and foremost...?

 

[nivek]

jim was likely lying

I think so too...

 

[nivek]

If your writing to share your experiences then continue writing as you have been and stay writing to how it flows out from you naturally...If you want to make more money from your writings then tailor the books to give some readers what they're asking...

 

[Toroid]

David Wilcock filled the first half of his latest book 'The Ascension Mysteries' with an anthology of his upbringing. He received requests from people to do that. It was a struggle to get through that until arriving at the so-called good stuff. It was like ordering a meal at a restaurant and waiting two hours to be served.

After Whitley Strieber wrote 'Communion' he took a fictional path with his following works.

 

[humanoidlord]

David Wilcock

 

[Toroid]

So I am looking for your advice...

1. Should I add more descriptions of the characters and more details about their surroundings?

2. What would you like to know more about?

I think you should be true to yourself and your experiences.

 

[Kchoo]

Thanks.

I am writing to share my experiences, but I also want it to be a good read.

I dont want to create a bunch of pretty scenery just for the sake of it, but I may be able to provide more detail of the actual experiences.

I donated all proceeds to charity, and did not recover my expenses either, so I am in the hole.

I would like my books to sell, but I am not doing it for money or fame....

As far as ego, I suppose I do enjoy making a challenging topic a rewarding experience for the readers.

 

[Kchoo]

I think Im just going to fix typos or grammar if anyone finds issues with that. The story is what it is as it was impressed on me to write it.

Who am I to question it?

 

[Rick Hunter]

I like the flow of consciousness style that Kchoo Experience has. Maybe, you should just keep writing like that for the time being. A few books down the road, write a book in which you delve into what these experiences mean to you, how they have impacted your life, and other large questions. In this book you could also answer questions and discuss things suggested by readers.

 

[Kchoo]

Quote from the Book "Dune" - "Fear is the mind killer."

I think this aligns well with what I have learned.

In my experiences, I was tested time and time again, to see if I could overcome fear. I was shown both positive and negative things, and I chose to focus on the positive. What I gained from that, was a sense of neutrality and peace.

But, to accept only the positive parts and reject other parts,was misguided.

It takes a holistic acceptance.

Everything is a duality. Earth is two halves, People are two halves. Individuals are two halves. The brain is two halves.. etc.

The question is how do we balance Our duality?

The answer is neutrality, allowing a mix of these quantum energies of duality to be unseperated, and realizing that any attempt to make something happen with a singular mindset will cause something of equivalent alter measure to come to exist to balance it out again.

When this is realized, then there is no longer anything to fear, and less of an inclination to try to change something external to yourself.

Real change comes from within, by being at peace, through a more neutral existence, or at least a realization that your overall impact is minimal by universal standards.

 

[Caeldeth]

jim was likely lying

I feel like some of what he said was true. Then he went overboard and started fabricating most of it.

 

[nivek]

Quote from the Book "Dune" - "Fear is the mind killer."

I think this aligns well with what I have learned.

In my experiences, I was tested time and time again, to see if I could overcome fear. I was shown both positive and negative things, and I chose to focus on the positive. What I gained from that, was a sense of neutrality and peace.

But, to accept only the positive parts and reject other parts,was misguided.

It takes a holistic acceptance.

Everything is a duality. Earth is two halves, People are two halves. Individuals are two halves. The brain is two halves.. etc.

The question is how do we balance Our duality?

The answer is neutrality, allowing a mix of these quantum energies of duality to be unseperated, and realizing that any attempt to make something happen with a singular mindset will cause something of equivalent alter measure to come to exist to balance it out again.

When this is realized, then there is no longer anything to fear, and less of an inclination to try to change something external to yourself.

Real change comes from within, by being at peace, through a more neutral existence, or at least a realization that your overall impact is minimal by universal standards.

Mixing fiction with allegedly factual events never sits well with me...

 

[Kchoo]

Mixing fiction with allegedly factual events never sits well with me...

Are you referring to DUNE?

I just thought it is interesting how often fear is referred to as the culprit.

Fear is not fiction,